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Act Structure – NaNoWriMo Special. Fiction Hack: Episode 19Act Structure

Act Structure – NaNoWriMo Special. Fiction Hack: Episode 19

Published July 12, 2024 by Colin

Act structure is something that everyone talks and has an opinion about, but is it actually helpful when you are writing your story? No. No, it’s not. But maybe sometimes it is. Allow me to unlock the doors of the prison called “Act Structure” for you. It’s up to you if you leave…

Ross’ Notes

  • Notes will come once I’m clear of NaNoWriMo!
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Powers of Darkness: The Lost Version of Dracula – Episode 18

Powers of Darkness: The Lost Version of Dracula – Episode 18

Published July 5, 2024 by Ross Lawhead

Powers of Darkness is the recently rediscovered early draft of Dracula. Somehow, this early manuscript found its way into the hands of an Icelandic translator and was translated into Icelandic in 1900. For over a hundred years the Icelanders have been reading this book as Dracula, despite there being major, significant differences between the English version and the translated version. With a translation back into English, and a scholarly edition of Powers of Darkness now on the shelves, it is open to speculation as to the origin of these changes. Is this really an early draft, or just an embellishment of the original?

Ross’ Notes

  • Buy Powers of Darkness by clicking on the cover below. It’s brilliant! The publisher has done an awesome job with added material, footnotes, and design. 10/10. Can’t recommend it enough:
  • Dracula is actually a little over 161,000 words. Writers and editors always talk in word count when discussing book lengths. You develop a sense for it after a while.
  • Read Dracula for free on your eReader by downloading it at Project Gutenberg.
  • I just said “piousness”. Should have said “piety”.
  • An excellent sourcebook for early vampires in literature is A Clutch of Vampires, by academic Raymond McNally. It gathers very early sources of Vampire myths, reprints Sheridan Le Fanu’s Carmilla in its entirety, and compiles newspaper clippings of real life vampires.
  • Sometimes I think Colin doesn’t pay attention to me fully. Was it unclear up to the point that he interrupted me that this book has gone from English into Icelandic, and then back into English? It’s unusual, certainly, but was it unclear? I don’t know. We cut out a section where I sound rather annoyed with him, but really I was annoyed with myself in not being able to express this all accurately.
  • Writers going “too deep” into the dark half of their own work is practically a syndrome. John Milton is considered to have developed the character of Satan WAY more than any other character in Paradise Lost, to the point where he obviously just gave up on Paradise Regained when he killed Satan off. Robert Louis Stevenson wrote The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde in three days. He horrified his wife when he read it to her, immediately burned the manuscript in front of her in the living room fireplace. Then he spent the next three days rewriting the entire thing.
  • Here’s Nosferatu in the 1922 movie Nosferatu:
  • Colin’s sign off is taken from Anthony Hopkin’s portrayal of Hannibal Lecter in Silence of the Lambs (1991). 

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The First Shared Universe – Halloween Special II: Episode 17first shared universe

The First Shared Universe – Halloween Special II: Episode 17

Published June 28, 2024 by Ross Lawhead

What was the first shared universe? The answer may be surprising (unless you listened to our last episode). Join us as we discuss the little-seen 1943 classic Frankenstein Meets The Wolf Man, as well as the following Universal Monster movies, and Ross compares Halloween as a kid in the US and the UK.

Ross’ Notes

  • Check out Part One of our Halloween special here!
  • I’m trying to reference Arsene Lupin Contra Sherlock Holmes, a lost silent film serial. Characters from different stories — or what we would call franchises or IPs (Intellectual Properties) had met each other before this movie, but these characters had not been previously established in their own movies, and thus would not qualify as the first shared universe as Wolf Man and Frankenstein did.
  • The chronology of the Univseral Monster movies is from Wikipedia.
  • Here’s the “Monkey Tennis” scene from I’m Alan Partridge, season 1, episode 1:
  • The Mexican project that Lon Chaney, Jr. was a part of was Face of The Screaming Werewolf (1964).
  • Below is a picture of me (left) and my brother, Halloween either 1988 or 1989. I’m in a homemade Ghostbusters uniform, and my brother is sporting a very Bela Lugosi-inspired Dracula outfit.
  • It is fun finally being back in the States for Halloween, and I still enjoy making my costumes from scratch. And not just mine, either. This is what I did to my son last year:
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Universal Horror Movies – Halloween Special I: Fiction Hack Episode 16Universal Monster Movies

Universal Horror Movies – Halloween Special I: Fiction Hack Episode 16

Published June 22, 2024 by Ross Lawhead

Why are the Universal Horror Movies important and why should we still talk about them today? Because believe it or not, the Hollywood movie industry is still making billions upon billions using the storytelling models that this specific series of movies developed that were kicked off over 85 years ago. Come inside and listen… if you dare!

Ross’ Notes

  • So… there’s going to be disagreement on exactly who is in the core cannon of the Universal Monster Movies. And that’s fine.
  • Doing a little more digging, it looks like the books I remember are the Crestwood monster books (orange series). Our library had maybe five of them. Here’s a short, informative video about them:
  • Much of my information comes from various special feature documentaries on DVDs that I own and that I borrowed from the library.
  • Information on dates and chronology (the same thing) for Universal horror movies I lifted from Wikipedia here.
  • Lon Chaney (Sr.) as The Hunchback in 1923:
  • Yes, German expressionism. Probably worth an episode. Sometimes misapplied, but everyone agrees that The Cabinet of Dr Caligari (1920) by Robert Weine did it to the best effect. The pictures below are not from a dream sequence, but what the movie actually looks like, all the way through. The film stock was also hand-tinted in green, red, blue, and whatever in order to enhance/subvert the mood. Check out this insanity:
  • Now compare to the Universal horror movies made in Hollywood a decade later. A little more sense of realism, but still a definite skewing of reality:
Frankenstein (1931)
Frankenstein (1931)
Dracula (1931)
  • M (1931) by Fritz Lang. Using a sound motif as a replacement for a character that is present, but unseen:
  • Blackmail (1929) by Alfred Hitchcock. Watch this short scene, I think it’s one of the best in the history of cinema:
  • Vampyre (1932) by Carl Th. Dreyer is a remarkably unsettling film using a lot of very basic techniques in very masterful ways:
  • Boris Karloff’s real name was William Henry Pratt.
  • Gods and Monsters (1998), dir. Bill Condon.
  • The play Presumption; or, The Fate of Frankenstein was performed in 1832, 13 years after the book was published.
  • The Invisible Man (1933), dir. James Whale. The “eaten away” scene:
  • The definition of sequel is my own. But that’s what it is, right?
  • The Hays Code was by no means comprehensive when it came into effect in 1930, but a crackdown, led by “popular opinion” was really ramped up in the mid-1930s.

The children now love luxury; they have bad manners, contempt for authority; they show disrespect for elders and love chatter in place of exercise. Children are now tyrants, not the servants of their households. They no longer rise when elders enter the room. They contradict their parents, chatter before company, gobble up dainties at the table, cross their legs, and tyrannize their teachers.

Attributed to Socrates (469–399 B.C.), by Plato quote from https://www.bartleby.com/73/195.html
  • Christmas is around the corner! If you wanted to treat a loved one (or yourself, I’m not going to let on), then I recommend the boxed set below. It contains the Spanish version of Dracula as a bonus feature.
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Why Are There So Many Spider-Man movies? Fiction-Hack: Episode 015

Published June 18, 2024 by Colin

Why are there so many Spider-Man Movies? I’ll tell you why there are so many Spider-Man movies! We do a box office and critical analysis of all of the Spider-Man movies up to the present day. Find out why the stories are recycled so much, why they keep recasting the character, and why he’s suddenly started showing up in the Avengers movies.

Ross’ Notes:

  • The tangent I mentioned actually occurred in the second Doctor Who episode and is not an out-take.
  • In 1967 National Periodical Publications, which was the official company name for DC Comics, was acquired by the Kinney National Company. That same year Kinney began negotiating with Warner Bros.-Seven Arts, the movie studio. In 1969 the deal was finalized and in 1972 the conglomerate was rebranded as Warner Communications Inc.
  • The Matrix hired two comic artists to produce conceptual art and storyboards for the movie: indie creator Geoff Darrow and mainstream artist Steve Skorce. Skorce would go on to draw for X-Men, and Darrow would create Shoalin Cowboy.
  • Bryan Singer made a conscious decision to dial back on the more flamboyant elements from comics, particularly the costumes, and also made decisions to underplay character elements as well, cutting characters like Mystique and Sabertooth out of back stories (later retconned). Marvel overtly rejected this approach, deciding to turn everything up to ten when it came to costumes and storylines borrowedfrom the comics.
  • Colin does raise an interesting question — did Spider-Man (2002) lay groundwork for Batman Begins (2005)? I can’t draw an artistic line between them, but the superhero appetite was certainly expanded by both, and the groundwork laid for the ridiculous Marvel Cinematic Universe (fans) vs. DC Expanded Universe (fans) “debate”.
  • The Incredible Hulk end credits scene is interesting in that it leads to absolutely nothing. General Ross isn’t seen again until the third Captain America movie, and there’s been no hint that he’s been involved in anything Stark discussed with him in that seen. But it was a hugely important scene in underscoring the shared universe because although Jackson had clout in his end scene, Downey jr. was coming in as the star from the previous movie.
  • I get my box office figures from boxofficemojo.com. Here are the Spider-Man in film ones. Bear in mind as well that a studio can often spend twice a budget on advertising, but then there are things like merchandising that aren’t taken into consideration when calculating a movie’s grosses.
  • Although the first five Spider-Man movies have a similar tonal feel, I think there is a concerted effort in the Garfield movies at world building with a view to making a franchise as opposed to a series. A series means just Spider-Man movies, a franchise means a kind of cluster of movies that would include Venom, Sinister Six, etc.
  • I apologize to everyone who tuned in to hear about the 1970s Spider-Man movies starring Nicholas Hammond. These movies really fit when discussing Spider-Man in film since they were shot for television and re-edited as movies for the international market.
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Who is Doctor Who? Part 2 – Fiction Hack: Episode 14

Who is Doctor Who? Part 2 – Fiction Hack: Episode 14

Published June 14, 2024 by Ross Lawhead

Who is Doctor Who? We continue to answer this question, covering the Third and Fourth Doctors played by Jon Pertwee and Tom Baker, as well as Berry Letts. 

Ross’ Notes

  • Jon Pertwee’s son, Sean Pertwee, is indeed Alfred Pennyworth on the TV show Gotham. If you haven’t seen Dog Soldiers (2002), I think it’s worth a watch. It’s a werewolf movie.
  • Hard Light Holograms. I think it’s a ridiculous concept.
  • Here’s a link to that Barry Letts book on Amazon:
  • We talk all about Spider-Man in film in our next episode.
  • Yes, I deliberately said “can of fish”, conflating “can of worms” and “kettle of fish”. There’s probably a word for this.
  • Doctor Who Magazine was launched in 1979 and is still going strong today. I pick up an issue every once in a while myself.
  • Terrence Dicks was also along-time serving story editor for the original series, as well as a later writer. He is probably the best person to answer the question “Who is Doctor Who?” In fact, it completely slipped my mind until just now that Dicks co-wrote one of the first in-canon book material for the Doctor in the 1972 book The Making of Doctor Who, which was part in-canon biography, part behind-the-scenes material. For many young British fans this was the first comprehensive look at how a TV show is made and many of those children were set on course for a career in television. I’ve read it, it’s pretty interesting:
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Truth and Story – Fiction Hack: Episode 013

Truth and Story – Fiction Hack: Episode 013

Published June 10, 2024 by Colin

Today we tackle and solve one of the eternal questions of humanity: what is truth? And what do we mean when we talk about truth and story? We have all the answers here for you guys. Seriously, we worked it out. You’re welcome.

Ross’ Notes:

  • Man, I’m talking fast. But hey, I’m passionate about truth and story! Maybe listen to this at 0.75 speed. I don’t know.
  • What percentage of the Bible do YOU think is factual? Tweet us a percentage mark with the #fictionhack.
  • Here is the letter from theologian Karl Barth:

Basel, 18 Feb. 1965 

Dear Christine, 

You have had to wait a terribly long time for an answer to your letter of 13 Dec.—not because of indifference, for I am sincerely interested in your welfare, and in that of your mother and sisters, and am always pleased to have good news from Zollikofen [near Bern, Switzerland].

Has no one explained to you in your seminar that one can as little compare the biblical creation story and a scientific theory like that of evolution as one can compare, shall we say, an organ and a vacuum-cleaner—that there can be as little question of harmony between as of contradiction? 

The creation story is a witness to the beginning or becoming of all reality distinct from God in the light of God’s later acts and words relating to his people Israel—naturally in the form of a saga or poem. The theory of evolution is an attempt to explain the same reality in its inner nexus—naturally in the form of a scientific hypothesis. 

The creation story deals only with the becoming of all things, and therefore with the revelation of God, which is inaccessible to science as such. The theory of evolution deals with what has become, as it appears to human observation and research and as it invites human interpretation. Thus one’s attitude to the creation story and the theory of evolution can take the form of an either/or only if one shuts oneself off completely from faith in God’s revelation or from the mind (or opportunity) for scientific understanding. 

So tell the teacher concerned that she should distinguish what is to be distinguished and not shut herself off completely from either side. 

My answer comes so late because on the very day you wrote, 13 Dec., I had a stroke and had to spend several weeks in the hospital. 

With sincere greetings which you may also pass on to your mother and sisters, 

Yours, 
Uncle Karl

Taken from http://www.faith-theology.com/2006/01/creation-and-evolution-letter-from.html
  • I was always curious as to why it is The Picture of Dorian Grey, not the Portrait. Not sure why Wilde made that decision, but he was was a genius, I don’t question, only seek to understand.
  • The line from the preface I’m referencing reads, “There is no such thing as a moral or an immoral book. Books are well written, or badly written. That is all.” And, as I say, he goes on to write a startlingly moral book. Again, Wilde is so complex, and he understood truth and story as meaning something different to what we’re talking about here, that there were any number of reasons why he may have written what he did. One that I didn’t bring up was that he thought this was true. Again, author’s aren’t always the best people to talk to about their own work, or how it should be purposed.
  • The Star Trek: The Next Generation episodes I’m referencing are Descent I & II, from seasons 6 and 7.
  • I’m thinking of making t-shirts that say “You Can’t Live On Crack”.
  • That G. K. Chesterton quote in context (emphasis mine):

Literature and fiction are two entirely
different things. Literature is a luxury; fiction is a necessity.
A work of art can hardly be too short, for its climax is its merit.
A story can never be too long, for its conclusion is merely
to be deplored, like the last halfpenny or the last pipelight.
And so, while the increase of the artistic conscience tends
in more ambitious works to brevity and impressionism, voluminous
industry still marks the producer of the true romantic trash.
There was no end to the ballads of Robin Hood; there is no end
to the volumes about Dick Deadshot and the Avenging Nine. These two
heroes are deliberately conceived as immortal.

The full short essay is available at: http://www.gkc.org.uk/gkc/books/penny-dreadfuls.html
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